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06 December 2006 @ 07:16 pm
"It's not warm when she's not here"  

Song: Ain't No Sunshine - Tome Jones
Fandom: Sheppard/Weir [Stargate: Atlantis]
Warning: Spoilers up to Common Ground [3x07] and a tiny one for Echos [3x12]
A/N: If I ever make a video that cheesy again shoot me!
Size: 9.93mb
Download links: [click-right; save as target] or watch it at youtube.

Loved it? Hate it? Most pathetic thing you've ever seen? Tell me please. Helps to make the next one better.
Feeling: dorky
Listening to: Ain't No Sunshine - Tom Jones
johnsheppardluv: got woobie?johnsheppardluv on December 6th, 2006 07:28 pm (UTC)
*snagged it from sendspace*

Well, I just gotta say that:

THIS VID WAS SOOOOOOOOOOO NOT CHEESY AT ALL!!! :) In fact, it rocked my sox a whole frackin' bunch!!! :) I loved it all!!! :) i especially loved the sepia tones you used AND the fact that you used the storm/the eye/common ground during the chorus parts. :) aweesome super duper job, dude!!! :)

It even made me tear up...a little...ok ok...a lot. lol;)


~ur pal,
Sharma :)
Say what?: Tinie 013sometimesartist on December 7th, 2006 08:07 am (UTC)
I made you tear up?! Seriously?! o_O *giggles*

I still insist it's cheesy because of the song. It's the song... *headdesk*
goa_44 on December 6th, 2006 08:01 pm (UTC)
I have to say I don't think it's cheesy either ;)
Cool work, I liked it! The colours were great and you edited the vid very well!
Say what?: Tinie 014sometimesartist on December 7th, 2006 08:05 am (UTC)
Yes, yes it is.... it's the song. The damn song that makes it cheesy beyond believe ;)
freyasdelight on December 6th, 2006 08:50 pm (UTC)
That was excellent! Loved it.
Say what?: Tinie 100sometimesartist on December 7th, 2006 08:04 am (UTC)
Thank you ♥
Yvi: Johnywii on December 6th, 2006 08:54 pm (UTC)
I really like it! :)
sad or angsty John is always good to see *g*
Say what?: Tinie 056sometimesartist on December 7th, 2006 08:03 am (UTC)
Yeah I like him getting tortured a bit from time to time :P
Ana: sparkyneedyouana_br on December 6th, 2006 11:35 pm (UTC)
Uhmm... I actually kinda liked it! The fades and transitions are very well displayed, plus you've created a very nice angsty mood! Good job!

Just a couple of things though, and please take this as contructive criticism from a fellow vidder!

I guess I know what you meant by the whole cheesy aspect... (is it the Tom Jones thing?!) Perhaps if you'd used some other version of the song, like the Lighthouse Family one, you wouldn't have that feeling!
You know, I've had a similar experience with a Sparky video before... I got carried away by the song, and the video eventually turned out kinda cheesy and overly fluffy for my personal taste! So, not my finest work!

Also, I liked the sepian effect, but some scenes were kinda dark because of it! Maybe next time, you could lighten them a bit...

But overall, it's a good vid! Thanks for sharing!
(loved the artwork, by the way!)
Say what?: Tinie 094sometimesartist on December 7th, 2006 05:14 am (UTC)
Yeah that's what I meant it's the song that kills me. Unfortunately I only had this version. Thanks so much for the critique. I'll definitely will remember it for the next video. And I'm glad you still liked it over all :D
Ana: johncarrieselizabethana_br on December 7th, 2006 01:04 pm (UTC)
Hey, it's never too late you know... you can always use the same file and only change the song to make a second version of it! But that's just a suggestion... you're the vidder, so it's up to you!

You're very welcome! I'm glad I could be of service! =p

(Oh, I've watched your video through the YouTube link and I couldn't help to notice you have my video 'Leave' on your favs list! So... thanks! =D)
Say what?: Tinie 097sometimesartist on December 7th, 2006 03:10 pm (UTC)
Yeah maybe I should do it.

(And yes, I love your video. It's among my all time favorites. Just to let you know)
Daughter of A Jediladyofavalon77 on December 7th, 2006 01:08 am (UTC)
Awww I liked it :)
The old news reel feel to it was nice though some parts were so dark I couldn't see what was going on. I liked when she was sitting alone at the table and when they came out to the balcony at the end ;)
Say what?: Tinie 034sometimesartist on December 7th, 2006 08:01 am (UTC)
I'll try to make it lighter next time I do a video in serpia tones, but I'm glad that you still liked it ♥
tasha2004tasha2004 on December 7th, 2006 08:11 pm (UTC)
That was just great. I loved it. loved the look